Wow! Toby finally rolled over on Keller. In a strange way, I think that's the healthiest thing he could have done given his talent for self-sabotage. Let the dead bury the dead. Still... I can't believe the degree to which Elliot has now become obsessed with Keller. It's almost like Toby transferred all his own thinking (and also Keller's posthumous charm) on to him somehow. That's the freaky part of this chapter.
The description of the violence and the thinking behind it is utterly nerve-jangling, but it's also giving me the courage to do write about it in a fanfic piece I'm writing. It's not easy... I'd rather get into the details of a fight and the thinking behind it than the grizzly details of a crime. But the last few chapters you've written have encouraged me to describe what I don't even want to see. So I thank you for emboldening me with your work... Sort of an unintended Christmas gift.
Now, with all that out of the way... PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE LET THERE BE A HAPPY ENDING FOR THESE TWO! I don't care anymore if they get back together, just let them not hate each other.
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Still... I can't believe the degree to which Elliot has now become obsessed with Keller. It's almost like Toby transferred all his own thinking (and also Keller's posthumous charm) on to him somehow. That's the freaky part of this chapter.
The description of the violence and the thinking behind it is utterly nerve-jangling, but it's also giving me the courage to do write about it in a fanfic piece I'm writing. It's not easy... I'd rather get into the details of a fight and the thinking behind it than the grizzly details of a crime. But the last few chapters you've written have encouraged me to describe what I don't even want to see. So I thank you for emboldening me with your work... Sort of an unintended Christmas gift.
Now, with all that out of the way...
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE LET THERE BE A HAPPY ENDING FOR THESE TWO!
I don't care anymore if they get back together, just let them not hate each other.
Hope you had a wonderful holiday season!
Love,
Adam