You have GOT to be kidding me! So close, and yet so far! ARGH
I can't believe I didn't see that ending coming, all things considered. Of course Holly was going to interrupt the make-up sex. OF COURSE she was.
He got off making Toby feel good. He wanted to make Toby to feel worthwhile, remind him that he deserved better than the choices he'd made in the past.
Oh, wow, having Elliot kiss all the areas of Toby's old bruises, random but not random at all, and that moment when Toby realizes it... that was brilliant, and just beautiful. I love that moment so much.
Loved the beginning too, and Elliot's self-realization that he still has issues with being seen as "gay." It makes sense that someone like him would still be concerned about that, but knowing that he shouldn't be gives one hope that he can get over it.
(Is it wrong that every time there is a mention of drag in this story, I immediately think "Oh, iskra667 will like this!" LOL)
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I can't believe I didn't see that ending coming, all things considered. Of course Holly was going to interrupt the make-up sex. OF COURSE she was.
He got off making Toby feel good. He wanted to make Toby to feel worthwhile, remind him that he deserved better than the choices he'd made in the past.
Oh, wow, having Elliot kiss all the areas of Toby's old bruises, random but not random at all, and that moment when Toby realizes it... that was brilliant, and just beautiful. I love that moment so much.
Loved the beginning too, and Elliot's self-realization that he still has issues with being seen as "gay." It makes sense that someone like him would still be concerned about that, but knowing that he shouldn't be gives one hope that he can get over it.
(Is it wrong that every time there is a mention of drag in this story, I immediately think "Oh,
Oh, and YAY for Holly's literary tastes!