You're very welcome. One of the most irresistible aspects of this story is that it is a very challenging fantasy to make seem real.
For me, this story has to have a certain degree of consistency with real life assumptions about people and circumstances to make it really satisfying. Otherwise, why bother? This is why I keep dwelling on the credibility quotient, on which you score such high marks (within the realm of fantasy), which is why I am definitely sticking with you. (That is also why the hot parts are so hot, because, aside from the fact that they are beautifully written, Toby and Elliot have had to work so much crap to get to them.)
I can't imagine how hard you must be working on this, and how much critical thought you have had to put into writing these chapters. I am going to move up further to the here where I stay with the most current discussion string. I want to respond to some of the other stuff you brought up here further along. Hopefully it will make sense. Thank you.
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Re: Chapter 42 Domesticated
Date: 2015-02-07 11:48 pm (UTC)For me, this story has to have a certain degree of consistency with real life assumptions about people and circumstances to make it really satisfying. Otherwise, why bother? This is why I keep dwelling on the credibility quotient, on which you score such high marks (within the realm of fantasy), which is why I am definitely sticking with you. (That is also why the hot parts are so hot, because, aside from the fact that they are beautifully written, Toby and Elliot have had to work so much crap to get to them.)
I can't imagine how hard you must be working on this, and how much critical thought you have had to put into writing these chapters. I am going to move up further to the here where I stay with the most current discussion string. I want to respond to some of the other stuff you brought up here further along. Hopefully it will make sense. Thank you.