I really liked the last sentence, with Toby finding dry irony in a total fiasco, it was totally in character and I loved that side of him in Oz, it gave him his best lines on the show.
Also loved the bit about Elliott not having too much illusions about to what extent he's Holly's new best friend. I love the trope in fics about Holly and Toby being extremely alike, and here it's really cool that they're not just alike for the good things (wits, bravery, etc...) but to see that Holly shares Toby's less glorious traits. She'd obviously really good at using people and looking totally angelic and blameless about it :D
But waw, so strange to see only 4 chapters to go! And I'm getting anxious about so little time left for Toby to get fucked up the ass... ;)
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Date: 2015-03-15 04:24 pm (UTC)Also loved the bit about Elliott not having too much illusions about to what extent he's Holly's new best friend. I love the trope in fics about Holly and Toby being extremely alike, and here it's really cool that they're not just alike for the good things (wits, bravery, etc...) but to see that Holly shares Toby's less glorious traits. She'd obviously really good at using people and looking totally angelic and blameless about it :D
But waw, so strange to see only 4 chapters to go!
And I'm getting anxious about so little time left for Toby to get fucked up the ass... ;)