Ha. I could have given the last few chapters to you, and taken a couple of weeks off.
Granted, there seem to be all sorts of niches and crannies of Ozfic I've never found or barely begun to explore, but I feel like I've read *most* of the Toby/Elliot, and I've never found one that connected their DUIs. Which is kind of staggering to me. It's just so neat. And that meant that if I wrote the pairing, I had to struggle all the way through to Toby meeting Elliot's kids.
Nah, Harry was safe. He's had enough of the neverending humiliations of his father visited upon his life. Holly would be (slightly) more likely, if to prove that she wasn't ashamed and double-dog dare them to make a fuss. Elliot, too, would have put it off as long as he possibly could. He hates showing his hypocrisy. Really, I think Toby's the only one that would choose to do it. Toby spills out his damage and his shames like it's his form of Tourette's, and Elliot should probably be grateful he held it in until day 2.
I love your thoughts on Kathleen. I was kind of 'eh' on her on the show, but the way her story and personality worked through these chapters made me appreciate her a lot more.
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Date: 2015-03-22 09:48 am (UTC)Ha. I could have given the last few chapters to you, and taken a couple of weeks off.
Granted, there seem to be all sorts of niches and crannies of Ozfic I've never found or barely begun to explore, but I feel like I've read *most* of the Toby/Elliot, and I've never found one that connected their DUIs. Which is kind of staggering to me. It's just so neat. And that meant that if I wrote the pairing, I had to struggle all the way through to Toby meeting Elliot's kids.
Nah, Harry was safe. He's had enough of the neverending humiliations of his father visited upon his life. Holly would be (slightly) more likely, if to prove that she wasn't ashamed and double-dog dare them to make a fuss. Elliot, too, would have put it off as long as he possibly could. He hates showing his hypocrisy. Really, I think Toby's the only one that would choose to do it. Toby spills out his damage and his shames like it's his form of Tourette's, and Elliot should probably be grateful he held it in until day 2.
I love your thoughts on Kathleen. I was kind of 'eh' on her on the show, but the way her story and personality worked through these chapters made me appreciate her a lot more.
Bah. The 4000+ word chapters kill me.
Thanks wycombe!
S.